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PaleWriter67776 Created Apr 11, 2025 14:28
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It's that puzzle you carry around
Like a jigsaw,
You stared upon the world of the broken
In search for that final piece
You could only see
In your own reflection
Deep down in the Lacune
You gave It a scar
And a smile
Bearing the Universe as it's crown
You reached in out of tune
For the other side had no waves to tell the shifting shades of truth apart
And so came only lies
As you refused to face the only real answer
That You possess the final scene unveiled already
And the piece that was missing at the end
Was in Your best interests to think of anything better...

And We glossed the resolve right over

Hanging around your neck,
You wore the answer to your own deepest question
And it wasn't a cross
And It isn't Death either
...
But the Heart The Philosopher mistook
As merely hidden Treasure






©palewriter

 

This topic has 11 comments

Ryan Razorwire

Apr 15, 2025 08:13

100

GoblinsGrin

Apr 15, 2025 08:20

Beautiful work!

GoblinsGrin

Apr 15, 2025 08:21

-Untangled Findings-

I can see all these pieces, these crumbles of you
The broken, the shattered, the bent and unglued.
A heart made of patches, held together by thread
You stitched it together with mourningful dread

Woven between these moments, intertwined and tangled with knots
How do you untangle your mind when’s it’s your own jumbled thoughts?

Caught in a web that’s gripping you tight,
You strain and you pull and and use all your might
To get away, just get away pull yourself free
You must do it for you, and never for me.

Free yourself and cut loose all those bindings,
Discover your hearts desire through untangled findings.

💖 Neon™ Waifu 💖

Apr 15, 2025 23:49

Coffee tastes like glee
And can make you wired
Coffee makes you poo and pee
But at least you won't be tired

The Jaypril Fool

Apr 16, 2025 12:07

Ryan Razorwire

Apr 17, 2025 04:12

People still drink coffee?
It’s just as worse as Taco Bell if not worse
It will put your stomach in a curse

Psychopatrish

Apr 17, 2025 05:13

Did the OP take a sleeping selfie?.....

Psychopatrish

Apr 17, 2025 05:17

Why is your selfie of you while asleep?
Who did take that selfie? Was it the sheep
You were counting to post here for a peep?
I think that you did it, you selfieist creep..

Psychopatrish

Apr 17, 2025 05:20

*Disclaimer

Poster does not actually feel the OP is a creep.
Slander may or may not have been used in the form of artistic licensing purposes.

May cause drowsiness, measles, old long Johnson Covid, croup, the balck plague.

Do not read poem if allergic to sarcasm. If you have an allergic reaction, call your Mom.*

Mercurius Mesmerize

Apr 17, 2025 23:27

^was that bit a poem.

Psychopatrish

Apr 18, 2025 03:11

Yes but you have to say it really quickly and with sort of a mumble.....

 

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